Talk:Tyrion Lannister/video draft

Write as the narrator: general advice on form of script
Bobstone33 made an excellent start here. :)

One advice from me: you don't need to go for "This scene should be about X" type writing. You can directly put words in the narrator's mouth here. :)

So instead of:


 * "Highlight whom is in his family and a short blurb or two on each person...this seems to be such an important part of his character."

go directly for (for example):


 * Tyrion's relationship with his family is a difficult one, to say the least. He is haunted by the disappointed of his father with his disfigured nature. That coupled with the weight of Tywin's expectations, causes bitterness and anger, and ultimately leads to...

or something similar. :)

--TOR (talk) 12:24, April 26, 2017 (UTC)